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APPEALS & DONOR CHOICE

Thanks, Then Another Ask?

Decide whether an invitation belongs in this donor’s thank-you.

Decide which donors can receive an invitation to give inside your annual thank-you, and leave with a clean thank-you, an invitation paragraph and a decision for each donor group.

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The decision

The finding in its setting

Sudhir, Fong and Roy (2019) varied HelpAge India’s annual thank-you letter to about 200,000 previous donors. Across everyone, adding an explicit request for another donation had no statistically significant effect on giving. Split by giving history, the response differed. Donors who had given recently, often or in larger amounts responded less well to the request, while lapsed, infrequent and smaller donors responded better. The authors estimate that sending the request only to the groups that responded well could raise donations by about 6–11%, a back-of-envelope calculation from their results rather than a separate test.

The letter was a once-a-year thank-you. The study shows that giving history can change how a request inside one is received. It doesn’t give you a permanent rule about whom to ask.

Four messages that all start with thank you

Most teams send several kinds of message that open with thanks. They have different triggers and owe the donor different things. This guide considers an invitation inside the annual thank-you; decisions about welcome messages belong with the welcome series.

What each message is for
MessageWhat triggers itWhat it owes the donorRoom for an invitation?
Gift receiptA gift is processed.An accurate record of the gift, promptly.No. Send it on time and unchanged, and never hold it back for a test.
Reply to a donor’s questionThe donor asked something.The answer, or a date for it.No. Answer first.
Welcome after a first giftA donor’s first gift.What happens next and how to reach you.Decide this with your welcome series, separately.
Annual thank-youYour calendar.Thanks and an honest account of the year.Possibly, for donors who pass the eligibility checks.

Eligibility comes before assignment

Two questions get mixed together in a thank-you test. Eligibility asks whether this donor should receive an invitation at all, given everything else going on with them. Assignment asks which eligible donors get which version, and it should be random if you want to learn anything.

Decide eligibility from facts in the record: the donor’s preferences, how and when they give, whether a payment is failing or a pledge instalment is due, whether someone owes them a reply or a report, and what else is scheduled to reach them in the next few weeks. Don’t decide it from who you think will give.

Then define your comparison groups by date, with a reference date, before anyone is assigned. People who unsubscribe or ask for fewer emails after assignment leave every later send at once and stay in the analysis under the version they were assigned. Dropping them from the count would hide the reaction you most need to see.

A receipt confirms the gift. An answer resolves a donor’s question. An annual thank-you expresses appreciation with confirmed facts. A new invitation asks for another action and requires its own suitability check.
One message is a candidate for an invitation, and only after the eligibility check.

The study

Worked case

The worked cases and templates use invented people and organizations.

Linden’s November letter

Linden Neighbors pairs volunteers with older people who live alone and runs a shopping minibus for them. Each November it emails donors an annual thank-you with a short account of the year. Its year-end appeal on November 24 and Giving Tuesday email on December 1 use the donor list frozen on October 31: donors who gave between November 1, 2024 and October 31, 2026.

This year Tomás, the development director, proposes adding a paragraph to the November 10 thank-you inviting a gift toward a second minibus. On November 2, before any talk of a test, Tomás asks Aisha in donor care for the contact timeline of every donor with open activity. The first one Aisha brings back belongs to Irene Kowalski.

Irene Kowalski’s contact timeline, as of November 2 (invented record)
DateWhatOwnerStatus
October 6Online gift of $150, with automatic receiptPayments systemSent October 6
October 9Irene asks whether the gift can go to the shopping service, and asks for the annual reportAisha, donor careAcknowledged; answer promised by October 20
October 20Answer to Irene’s questionAisha, with financeOverdue. Finance hasn’t yet confirmed how to answer.
November 10Annual thank-you, possibly with invitationTomásPlanned
November 24Year-end appealTomásPlanned
December 1Giving Tuesday emailCommunicationsPlanned

Irene has three messages planned in three weeks, at least two of them requests for money, and an answer that is almost two weeks late. The proposed invitation is about the shopping service, the very thing Irene asked about. Sending it before the answer would tell Irene the organization had time to ask but not to reply.

Tomás pauses the invitation for Irene. Aisha gets the answer from finance and sends it with the annual report by November 6. Irene receives the plain thank-you on November 10. The November 24 appeal goes ahead, because Irene’s preferences allow appeal emails.

From one record to the whole list

Aisha applies the same checks to all 2,400 donors who gave between November 1, 2023 and October 31, 2026. Each donor goes into the first row that applies, so nobody is counted twice.

Who is eligible for the invitation (invented counts)
Check, in orderDonorsWhat they receive on November 10
No email consent, or asked not to be emailed310Nothing by email. Postal thanks where their preferences allow.
Asked not to receive fundraising requests140The plain thank-you
Monthly donors180The monthly donors’ own thank-you
Managed personally by a relationship manager60A letter from their relationship manager
Open issue: unanswered question, overdue promise, failed payment or pledge instalment due45The plain thank-you, once the issue is resolved
Last gift on or after October 11, 2026165The plain thank-you. They had a receipt and thanks within the past month.
Eligible for the invitation1,500Decided by group, below
All donors2,400–

A decision for each group

Tomás defines the groups before anyone is assigned. Current donors made their last gift between November 1, 2024 and October 10, 2026; lapsed donors made theirs between November 1, 2023 and October 31, 2024. Of the 1,500 eligible, 1,100 are current and 400 are lapsed.

Tomás’s decision for this year’s letter (invented counts)
GroupEligibleDecisionReason
Current: last gift November 1, 2024 to October 10, 20261,100Plain thank-you for all 1,100All are on the November 24 appeal list, so an invitation on November 10 would put two requests 14 days apart. Tomás will reconsider with next year’s calendar.
Lapsed: last gift November 1, 2023 to October 31, 2024400Test: 200 plain thank-you and 200 with the invitation, assigned at randomThey aren’t on the year-end lists, so the annual thank-you is the only fundraising campaign planned for them this winter. Receipts and replies continue as usual. With 200 in each half, the result can point to something worth checking. It won’t settle it.

Aisha assigns the lapsed donors on November 3 and saves the file read-only. Gifts from November 10 to December 8 will be matched to the version each donor was assigned, and the team will review on December 15. Tomás uses the completed appeal test linked below to show colleagues how to read the result group by group, against everyone originally assigned.

The annual thank-you

Sent November 10 to every donor receiving the plain version. Program figures confirmed by the program director on November 4.

The annual thank-you
Subject: Thank you from Linden Neighbors Hi [first name], Thank you for supporting Linden Neighbors. This year, 140 volunteers made weekly visits to 210 older people who live alone in [area]. Our shopping minibus made 1,900 trips, and 37 people who hadn’t left home in a month or more joined the Thursday lunch club. If you have a question, or you’d like to hear from us more or less often, reply to this email or call Aisha on [number]. With thanks, Tomás [surname] Development Director, Linden Neighbors

The invitation paragraph

Added after the program paragraph for the 200 lapsed donors assigned to it. Nothing else changes. Finance confirmed the fund wording on November 4.

The invitation paragraph
Our minibus is fully booked on Tuesdays and Fridays, and 26 people are waiting for a shopping slot. We’re raising money for a second minibus. If you’d like to help, you can give at [link]. Gifts made through this email go to Linden’s general fund, which pays for the minibus along with our other services. If now isn’t the right time, there’s no need to reply.

Tomás’s note to colleagues

Sent November 3, after assignment.

Tomás’s note to colleagues
Subject: November 10 thank-you: who gets what Hi all, The annual thank-you goes out on November 10. Here’s who gets which version and what needs to happen first. Plain thank-you: 1,100 current donors, 140 who don’t want fundraising requests, 165 who gave on or after October 11, 200 lapsed donors in the comparison half, and 45 with open issues once each issue is resolved. Thank-you with the minibus paragraph: 200 lapsed donors, chosen at random from 400. Not in this send: 310 without email consent (postal thanks where allowed), 180 monthly donors (their own letter) and 60 managed personally (their manager’s letter). Aisha: please clear the 45 open issues by November 6, starting with overdue answers. Anyone still open on November 9 gets the thank-you after their issue is resolved. Finance: receipts carry on exactly as usual. Please don’t hold any back. Everyone: if a donor unsubscribes or asks for fewer emails after November 10, remove them from every later send straight away. Aisha keeps them in the test count under their original version. Replies: Aisha answers within two working days, whichever version the donor received. Window: gifts from November 10 to December 8, matched to the assignment saved on November 3. Review: December 15. Tomás

Read a completed appeal test

Put it to work

Your annual thank-you

Adapt for donors who will receive the annual thank-you without an invitation. Confirm each figure with the program team.

Your annual thank-you
Subject: Thank you from [organization] Hi [first name], Thank you for supporting [organization]. [Gift sentence, only where you’ve checked the gift record.] [Two or three sentences on what happened this year, each confirmed by the program team.] If you have a question, or you’d like to hear from us more or less often, reply to this email or call [name] on [number]. With thanks, [Name] [Role], [Organization]

Your invitation paragraph

Placed after the program paragraph, for eligible donors only. Agree the fund wording with finance.

Your invitation paragraph
[What’s needed, in one or two confirmed sentences.] If you’d like to help, you can give at [link]. Gifts made through this email [destination, in wording agreed with finance]. If now isn’t the right time, there’s no need to reply.

Your pre-send decision sheet

Complete it before anyone is assigned. Each donor goes in the first eligibility row that applies.

Your pre-send decision sheet
ANNUAL THANK-YOU: PRE-SEND DECISION Send date: Owner: Reference date for giving history: Base list (who, and gift dates): 1. MESSAGES THAT STAY SEPARATE Gift receipts unchanged and on usual timing: ☐ confirmed with finance Replies owed to donors listed and assigned: ☐ Welcome series unaffected: ☐ 2. ELIGIBILITY Check | Donors | What they receive No email consent, or asked not to be emailed | | No fundraising requests | | Monthly or recurring donors | | Managed personally | | Open issue (unanswered question, overdue promise, failed payment, pledge instalment due) | | Gave within [days] of the send | | Other: | | Eligible for the invitation | | Total (must equal the base list) | | 3. CONTACT CALENDAR, [send date] TO [six weeks later] Other messages planned for eligible donors (date, message, which donors): 4. GROUPS, DEFINED BEFORE ASSIGNMENT Group 1 (definition, with dates): Count: Group 2 (definition, with dates): Count: 5. DECISION FOR EACH GROUP Group | Plain for all / invitation for all / test | Reason | Revisit on 1. 2. 6. IF TESTING Assignment date and method: Saved file (where, read-only): Window for counting gifts: Primary measure: net revenue per assigned donor, by group and version Guardrails: unsubscribes, complaints and no-solicitation requests, by group and version Later opt-outs removed from later sends and kept in the count under their assigned version: ☐ Review date: Reading the result: https://gratona.com/atlas/reading?source=before-you-borrow-the-winning-email 7. SIGN-OFF Development (name, date): Donor care (name, date): Finance, for receipts (name, date):

Your note to colleagues

Send after the eligibility and assignment files are checked. Give each open task one person and a date.

Your note to colleagues
Subject: [Date] thank-you: who gets what Hi all, The annual thank-you goes out on [date]. The checked list and saved assignment are at [location]. Plain thank-you: [groups and counts]. Thank-you with the invitation: [groups and counts; assignment method if testing]. Separate arrangements: [who, their message or contact method, owner]. Open issues: [name] will answer the questions and resolve overdue promises by [date]. Anyone still awaiting an answer gets their thank-you after the issue is resolved. Receipts: [name] confirms they continue on their usual timing, whichever version a donor receives. Contact preferences: [name] applies new opt-outs or frequency changes to every sending queue before the next send. Keep donors in the test count under their original assignment, even if later contact stops. Replies: [name] responds within [time], whichever version was received. Counting window: [dates]. Review: [date and person]. Count gifts and contact outcomes against everyone originally assigned, by donor group and version. [Name]

The thank-you decision sheet

The pre-send sheet, both message versions and the note to colleagues in one file.

Download the decision sheet

Exceptions

  • A donor gives between assignment and the send. The receipt goes out as usual, and the donor stays in the assigned group.
  • An open issue isn’t resolved by the send date. Send the thank-you later, after the answer.
  • Two donors in one household fall into different groups. Decide before assignment whether you assign people or households, and send one version per unit.
  • A relationship manager wants a managed donor included. Managed donors get their manager’s letter. Keep them out of the test.
  • A donor in the test asks for no fundraising email. Honor it in every queue at once. The donor stays in the count under the original version.

Check before you press send

Ask a colleague who wasn’t in the planning to pick five eligible donors at random and read each one’s contact calendar for the next six weeks. If any would receive a request before an answer they’re owed, or two requests close together, fix the list before sending.

After the window, confirm that every receipt went out on its normal timing and every reply was answered within the agreed time, in both versions. Development owns the decision sheet, donor care owns open issues and replies, and finance owns receipts.

Continue with the research

K. Sudhir, Hortense Fong and Subroto Roy worked with HelpAge India to vary the annual thank-you letter sent to previous donors, including a version with an explicit request for another gift.

Read the description of the letter versions, then the results by recency, frequency and gift size. The section on targeting shows how the 6–11% estimate was calculated and what it assumes.

Greedy or Grateful? Asking for More when Thanking Donors ↗

K. Sudhir, Hortense Fong and Subroto Roy

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